Yes, I like that song.
Despite sensible pleas for sleep, my right brain seems to be at its most inventive in the wee hours. And so I was up at three this morning with aforementioned PaperMate and legal pad, wrestling the beast known as "Stragglers."
The result: a revision switching from first person to third. This allowed me to delineate each character and bring in a conflict that "I" hadn't revealed.
With any luck, editors will see it as well.
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